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Come rain, do come shine

One day, you shall be mine

And the hurt and tears

Shall turn to smiles and cheers

Let me be your strength

Let me be your shoulder

To keep your pain away, at an arms length

As we grow older

My heart, for you, my love

Give me yours

Safe keeping's my middle name, little dove

It's no chore

I shall keep it hidden and locked away

Inside me

Just promise you won't take it back someday

My Love to be...
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hackapaint Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013
Very touching! A very good way to live!
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HannaKarlsson Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very beautiful!
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chrisss3 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013   General Artist
Beautiful poem!! <3 =)
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derzaknight Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Student General Artist
well done limerick  
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iKEET7 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great work! I like it a lot!! =D
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cxmbUfuckingasshole Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
Not sure if this was what you were going for, but it sounds really sad to me
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DanielaDantas Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lovely, the rhythm is fantastic and it really touched me
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feavre Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013   Digital Artist
Beautiful, lovely poetry.  
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Loveless-Nights Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013
That's very beautiful, the rythm and words used makes it very sweet and soft. Loved it
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stockmodelfancyface Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
so biautiful !!!
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